Give it a try

等待 心中充滿期待

徘徊 深怕受到傷害

難猜 你心中奏的是甚麼曲派

忍耐 壓抑著心中翻滾的熱愛

 

等你點頭, let’s give it a try

回味相處的時候, 任何事情都不能將我打敗

當你點頭, 說let’s give it a try

我不知所措, 連自己有多快樂都算不出來

 

奇怪 你說需要時間我反而釋懷

大概 我知道我的感覺不會變壞

我在 這裡等你不會走開

只要 你知道我的感情快要將我掩埋

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11 thoughts on “Give it a try

  1. ㄟ~~~ 阿嬤要譜曲的版權是嗎?
    版權我先給女主角, 你再跟她討吧 XD
    (雖然她應該還不知道這首詩的存在)

    而且我覺得還沒寫完, 還不夠當做一首歌吧.

  2. You need an intro billy. That looks like the chorus and you probably need an alternate chorus for the ending

  3. Kaman>
    lol 不愧是學音樂的~~~ you are the pro!
    As to the intro and the ending, 隨緣吧 XD
    I don’t want to feel like working when i write. I just let it come to me naturally.

    Amah>
    哼哼唱唱我怎麼管得到啦~~ XD

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